I like to sing all kind of song related to wishes.
학생이 쓴 원문
In Christmas, we say \"we wish you a merry Christmas\"
When I was a child, I often wish that my parents might be other persons.
And I fell asleep in my bed.
Today is a bit cold rather than normal days.
And I wish you would be a good teacher.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thank you for doing your homework ^^
I hope you are having a great day ☺
In Christmas, we say \"we wish you a merry Christmas\"
>> On Christmas day, we say \'We wish you a Merry Christmas\'.
When I was a child, I often wish that my parents might be other persons.
>> When I was a child, I often wish that I have different parents.
And I fell asleep in my bed.
>> Then, I fell asleep in my bed.
Today is a bit cold rather than normal days.
>> Today\'s weather is colder than usual.
And I wish you would be a good teacher.
>> I also wish you would be a good teacher.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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