I like to take a picture
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to take a picture and watching a famous photo
it is fun to see a old picture as our photo
a all of photo leaves the memory for us
let you take a your photo a lot as much as you can do for your memory
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. This was interesting to read. Whenever I look at old photos, it reminds me of good memories. With the technology we have these days, it is easier to keep old photos that remind us of wonderful memories. Thank you and keep up the good work. Take it easy. ~Jane C\",)
I like to take a picture and watching a famous photo
>>> I like taking pictures and looking at famous photos.
it is fun to see a old picture as our photo
>>> It is fun to see some of our old pictures as well.
a all of photo leaves the memory for us
>>> Old photos reminds us of good memories.
let you take a your photo a lot as much as you can do for your memory
>>> Take as many photos of yourself for good memories.
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