I like to watch a movie than a reading

2020-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Melody

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Dear [Name], I like to watch a movie. Reading is boring than watching movie. These days, we can not go outside for Covd19. So I enjoy a movie. Reading is difficult for me. My age is 51. It is very difficult to read small character. For reading, I have to change my glassese. I watch a movie of american without translation for upgrade my english ability.

강사 첨삭

1. I like to watch a movie.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I like watching movies.

2. Reading is boring than watching movie.
>>Reading is boring unlike watching a movie.

3. These days, we can not go outside for Covd19.
>>These days, we can not go outside because of Covd19.

4. So I enjoy a movie.
>>So, I enjoy some movies.

5. Reading is difficult for me. 
>>CORRECT
OR>>Reading is hard for me.

6. My age is 51.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I\'m 51 years old.

7. It is very difficult to read small character.
>>It is very difficult to read small characters.

8. For reading, I have to change my glassese.
>>For reading, I have to change my glasses.

9. I watch a movie of american without translation for upgrade my english ability. 
>>I watch an American movie without translation to upgrade my English ability. 

Very good sentences.

- T. Melody ^^

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