I like watermelon.
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I like watermelon.
This season is summer, so I\'m looking forward to eat watermelon.
Especially, I prefer to eat cool watermelon in the refrigerator.
I want to eat a lot, but I can\'t. Because it\'s so juicy.
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Hi Kara!^^
Especially, I prefer to eat cool watermelon in the refrigerator.
I want to eat a lot, but I can\'t. Because it\'s so juicy.
I am a fruit lover!
I can eat almost all kinds of fruits except coconut and durian.
The Philippines is a tropical country, so I am so lucky to have various fruits.
Andrea
I like watermelon.
>> Correct
This season is summer, so I\'m looking forward to eat watermelon.
>> It is the summer season, so I am looking forward to eating watermelon.
>> Especially, I prefer to eat cold watermelon from the refrigerator.
I want to eat a lot, but I can\'t. Because it\'s so juicy.
>> I want to eat a lot, but I can\'t because it\'s so juicy.
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