I live in geoje island

2014-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Nina. Do you have a good weekend???? unfortunatly, I don't have a good weekend. because I have to go to work today.... Anyway My hometown is Geoje island and Geoje has been changed a lot. When I was a kid, Geoje is just barren. but since Two company(DSME, SHI) were founded in Geoje, Geoje has been improved. For example Person who live in geoje is increase!! and Many franchise are founded in Geoje. I think this change is very good to me and all citizens.

강사 첨삭

Hello there JAE ^-^
Thanks for your concern. ^_^
I am having a nice time.
It\'s okay, cheer up!
Don\'t worry, you will have more experience and a lot of money. Hihihi! Just kidding!
Wow, your hometown really changed a lot.
I am sure that a lot of people are really happy.
Thank you for sending this in. I hope that you will have a great time.
Take Care! Talk to you in class.
Teacher Nina

Hello Nina.
>> Correct!
Do you have a good weekend????
>>Did you mean: Are you having a good weekend?
unfortunatly, I don\'t have a good weekend.
>> Unfortunately, I am not.
>> OR: Unfortunately, I am not having a good weekend.
>> OR: I am not feeling great this weekend.
because I have to go to work today....
>> It is because I have to go to work today.
>> OR: It is because I have to report for work today.
Anyway My hometown is Geoje island and Geoje has been changed a lot.
>> Anyway, my hometown changed a lot.
>> OR: Anyway, Geoje changed a lot.
When I was a kid, Geoje is just barren.
>> When I was a kid, Geoje was barren.
>> OR: When I was a kid, Geoje Island was unproductive.
but since Two company(DSME, SHI) were founded in Geoje, Geoje has been improved.
>> Did you mean: But since two companies which are DSME and SHI were built, the place improved.
For example Person who live in geoje is increase!! and Many franchise are founded in Geoje.
>> For example, the person who lives in Geoje increased and there were a lot of franchise there.
>> OR: The population in Geoje increased and even businesses.
I think this change is very good to me and all citizens.
>> I think this change was very good for me and to all citizens.
>> OR: I think the change was beneficial for all of the people who are residing in Geoje.

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