I'll introduce my philippine friends(2)
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Next, I'll tell you about my best friend Amanda,
Amanda and me are heart to heart friend. During the last English program, She was a my roommate for 1 month. When I stayed there, I usually poured out your to her and she always tried to have a heart.
But, Sometimes, she couldn't understand about my situation, finally, she sympathized with me and that my rear friend had her heart in the right places.
My last introduction is about my philippine boyfrienad. his name is John.We met in a cafeteria at first time.He was not to wear his heart on his sleeve, the other side I wore my heart on my sleeve. Whenever I played with him many times, I treated him as just friend. That is my heart bleeds for him.I were a cold- hearted person only for him.
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Next, I'll tell you about my best friend Amanda. >>> CorrectAmanda and me are heart to heart friend.
>>> Amanda and I are heart to heart friends.
During the last English program, S(s)he was a my roommate for 1 month. When I stayed there, I usually poured out your to her and she always tried to have a heart. >>> CorrectBut, Sometimes, she couldn't understand about my situation, finally, she sympathized with me and that my rear friend had her heart in the right places.
>>> but sometimes, she couldn't understand my situation; finally, she sympathized with me and that my rear friend had her heart in the right places.My last introduction is about my philippine boyfrienad.
>>> Lastly, I will introduce my boyfriend from the Philippines.
h(H)is name is John.
We met in a cafeteria at first time.
>>> We first met at/in a cafeteria.
He was not to wear his heart on his sleeve, the other side I wore my heart on my sleeve.
He was not supposse to wear his heart on his sleeve, and he did that; I, on the other hand, did the opposite.
Whenever I played with him many times, I treated him as just (just as a) friend.
>>> Whenever I played with him many times, I treated him as just (just as a) friend.
That is my heart bleeds for him.I were a cold- hearted person only for him. >>> Correct
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