I'll introduce my philippine friends(3)
학생이 쓴 원문
Because he didn't match with my character, I always told him to be
strong hearted. His characters were cowardly and chicken-hearted.
Eventually, I had to decide to part with him. I can't express only words. At that time, we were very grave. Even though he lost heart, he had a change of heart.Afer passing many days, we became a close friend.I have put my heart at rest from that time on.
although I live in seoul, I never forget dear my friends. Whenver I see many photos which took a picture with them, I remember their beloved images.
강사 첨삭
Because he didn't match with my character, I always told him to be strong hearted.
>>> Correct
His characters were cowardly and chicken-hearted.
>>> He was cowardly and chicken hearted.Eventually, I had to decide to part with him.
>>> Correct
I can't express only words.
>>> I can't express what I felt with just words.
At that time, we were very grave. Even though he lost heart, he had a change of heart.
>>>Correct
Afer passing many days, we became a close friend.
>>> After many days have passed, we became close friends.
I have put my heart at rest from that time on.
>>>Correctalthough I live in seoul, I never forget dear my friends. Whenver I see many photos which took a picture with them, I remember their beloved images.
>>>Although I live in Seoul, I never forget my dear friends.
Whenver I see many photos which took a picture with them, I remember their beloved images.
>>> Whenever I see the photos,
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