i'll introduse my philippine friends (1)
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When I was in Philippine for 2 months, I made a lot of relationships with pilippine friends. So, I desire to recommend you about them.
My first friend is my teacher and friend. His name is Buster. He is one of the best handsome guys I know. I heard that when he was young, his female friends had lost their heart. After that, He made a girlfriend. But, He won his heart due to his mind.
Actually, He didin't fall in love with her. The more he met her for a long time, The more he decide to break up her.
Anyway, I think that he is hard hearted and has a heart of stone.
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Hi [이름] [이름] here are your grammar corrections:
When I was in Philippine for 2 months, I made a lot of relationships with pilippine friends. So, I desire to recommend you about them.
>>>When I was in the Philippines for 2 months, I made a lot of relationships with Filipino friends. So, I desire to recommend them to you. (or introduce them to you)
My first friend is my teacher and friend. His name is Buster.
>>> Correct
He is one of the best handsome guys I know.
>>> He is one of the most handsome guys I know. (or I know of)
I heard that when he was young, his female friends had lost their heart.
>>> Change heart to hearts.
After that, He made a girlfriend. But, He won his heart due to his mind. >>>CorrectActually, He didin't fall in love with her. The more he met her for a long time, The more he decide(d) to break up her.Anyway, I think that he is hard hearted and has a heart of stone. >>> Correct
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