I’ll show my love to my parents by calling often.
학생이 쓴 원문
I’ll show my love to my parents by calling often.
I don‘t live together with my parents, because I’m an university student.
But I‘ll still a young child for them, so they will always worry about me alone.
Therefore, calling often is good for showing my love.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!
I don‘t live together with my parents, because I’m an university student.
But I‘ll still a young child for them, so they will always worry about me alone.
Therefore, calling often is good for showing my love.
Showing love to parents is really hard.
I do not say I love you to my parents, I feel awkward.
I just give them what they need.
I guess that\'s how I show my love to them.
Andrea
I’ll show my love to my parents by calling often.
>> I show my love to my parents by calling often.
>> I don\'t live with my parents because I am a university student.
But I‘ll still a young child for them, so they will always worry about me alone.
>> But I am still young to them, so they always get worried about me being alone.
Therefore, calling often is good for showing my love.
>> Therefore, calling them is often good to show love.
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