i\'ll spice pool party up.
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'ll go pool party this weekend. So I\'ll spice party up for this weekend. I got nice bikini at ARKET store that I really like. I\'ve ever been to pool party yet, so i really expect this weekend.
강사 첨삭
Wow! That will definitely be a different experience, Stella! I am also excited for you. -Faith-
I\'ll go pool party this weekend. So I\'ll spice party up for this weekend. >> I will go to a pool party this weekend, so I will spice our party up by then.
I got nice bikini at ARKET store that I really like.
>> I got a nice bikini at Arket store that I really like.
I\'ve ever been to pool party yet, so i really expect this weekend.
>> I have never been to a pool party yet, so I really expect this weekend.
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