I love B1A4.
학생이 쓴 원문
Today's Friday.Today's very very hot.
I don't like it.
Today's title.I love B1A4.
B1A4's very very very handsome.
I like they're leader.
Leader's very handsome best!!!
He's tall and thiny.
강사 첨삭
Hi baby ANNA^^
Thank you for sendinge me your composition. I knew it! you like him! He\'s adorable and cute.I also hate hot weather.Great job! You were able to express yourself well.I miss you^^ I hope to hear from you soon.Kamsahamnida baby^^
Teacher Nina
Today\'s Friday.
>>Correct
Today\'s very very hot.
>>Today was really hot.I don\'t like it.
>>Correct
OR >>I don\'t like the weather.Today\'s title.
>>Correct
I love B1A4.
>>CorrectB1A4\'s very very very handsome.
>>B1A4 is really handsome.I like they\'re leader.
>>I like their leader.Leader\'s very handsome best!!!
>>Their leader is really handsome and he\'s best.He\'s tall and thiny.
>>He\'s tall and thin.
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