I love Christmas.

2019-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

What is the best holiday for you and why? - I think Christmas is the best for me. Because The more I am getting older, I can\'t feel something special in my birthday. But on christmas The world celebrates the day. Also, I am [Name]. Therefore The day is meaningful for me. When I was in child, I prepared a present for Santa. I hung my socks on the wall and I wrote a letter and put it in my socks. While I was sleeping, Santa put the present at the head of my bed. I remember the time when i got the present. I was so happy. I got to know the santa was my mom. My mom pretended to be a santa. But It is very precious memory for me. So I think Christmas is the best holiday for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

Thank you for submitting your answer.

I really appreciate it. ^^

It is also the same for me. I really like Christmas because for me, it is the time when I feel like I\'m a child again.

I\'m happy about receiving and giving gifts. I also like it because my family gathers together on this special holiday. ^^

~Teacher Gina

I think Christmas is the best for me.

>> CORRECT.

Because The more I am getting older, I can\'t feel something special in my birthday.

>> Because the more that I am getting older, the more that I can\'t feel something special on my birthday.

But on christmas The world celebrates the day.

>> But on Christmas, the world celebrates that day.

Also, I am [Name].

>> I am also a Christian.

Therefore, the day is meaningful for me.

>> CORRECT.
When I was in child, I prepared a present for Santa.

>> When I was a child, I prepared a present for Santa.

I hung my socks on the wall and I wrote a letter and put it in my socks.

>> CORRECT.

While I was sleeping, Santa put the present at the head of my bed.

>> CORRECT.

I remember the time when I got the present. I was so happy.

>>CORRECT.
I got to know the santa was my mom.

>> I got to know that Santa was my mom.

My mom pretended to be a Santa.

>> CORRECT.

But it is very precious memory for me.

>> But it is a very precious memory for me.

So I think Christmas is the best holiday for me.

>> CORRECT.

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