I love eating delicious foods with my family
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer eating at home with my family.
Because my mother is the best chef ever to me!
When I think that sometimes my mother bothers cooking, I buy fast foods like pizza after working.
Actually my home is in the country side, so we can\'t take a delivery.
We always go out to town when we want to eat delivery foods.
And I feel happy when my family members(grandma, mother, father and my brother) have a dinner together.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about eating. I agree that sometimes it is better to eat at home and there are also times that it is better to eat out. Also, eating with our family is a very good experience.
-Khai
I prefer eating at home with my family.
>> CORRECT
Because my mother is the best chef ever to me!
Because my mother is the best chef ever to me!
>> It is because my mother is the best chef for me!
When I think that sometimes my mother bothers cooking, I buy fast foods like pizza after working.>> Sometimes, I think my mother is busy and has no time to cook. With this, I will buy fast food like pizza after work.
Actually my home is in the country side, so we can\'t take a delivery.>> Actually my home is in the countryside, so we can\'t take a delivery.
OR
>> My home is located in the countryside, so we do not have food delivery service.
We always go out to town when we want to eat delivery foods.>> We always go out to town when we want to eat delivery food.
And I feel happy when my family members(grandma, mother, father and my brother) have a dinner together.>> And I feel happy when my family members (grandma, mother, father, and my brother) have dinner together.
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