I love fish and seafood.
학생이 쓴 원문
I really love fish and seafood.
However I can\'t often eat them because they are more expensive than other foods.
There are many seafood restaurants in Busan city in my country.
Do you know \"Jagalchi Fish Market(자갈치 시장)\" in Busan?
There is a big market selling for all fish and seafood.
There, we can eat them a little cheaper.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
I\'m really curious about Busan.
Maybe, you can tell me more about it in class.
It sounds like an interesting place.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I really love fish and seafood.
>> Correct
However I can\'t often eat them because they are more expensive than other foods.
However I can\'t often eat them because they are more expensive than other foods.
>> However I can\'t often eat them because they are more expensive than other kinds of food.
There are many seafood restaurants in Busan city in my country.
There are many seafood restaurants in Busan city in my country.
>> Correct
Do you know \"Jagalchi Fish Market(자갈치 시장)\" in Busan?
Do you know \"Jagalchi Fish Market(자갈치 시장)\" in Busan?
>> Correct
There is a big market selling for all fish and seafood.
There is a big market selling for all fish and seafood.
>> It is a big market selling all kinds of fish and seafood.
There, we can eat them a little cheaper.
There, we can eat them a little cheaper.
>> There, we can eat them for a cheaper price.
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