I love fruity smells>< It feels so fresh!!

2021-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

[FRUIT] 1. I think the fruit that similar with my personality is Pineapple. 2. Tropical fruit is just in the rain forest. 3. Fruit that I want to eat is coconut. [Fruity] 1. No matter how fruity an e-cigarette smells, it is just a cigarette. 2. Some food\'s smell is very sweet, because cook add a fruity smells. 3. Fruity makes people feel fresh!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Maria!

Thank you so much for following the instructions I\'ve given.
You were able to make/compose sentences using the noun \'fruit\' and the adjective \'fruity\'.
I have made some modifications for you to review.
See you later in class!^^

__Teacher Mayleen :)


[FRUIT]
1. I think the fruit that similar with my personality is Pineapple.
>>> I think the fruit that is similar to my personality is pineapple.
2. Tropical fruit is just in the rain forest.
>>> Tropical fruits are abundant in rain forests.
3. Fruit that I want to eat is coconut.
>>> The fruit I want to eat is coconut.

[Fruity]
1. No matter how fruity an e-cigarette smells, it is just a cigarette.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: No matter how fruity an e-cigarette smells, it is still a cigarette.
2. Some food\'s smell is very sweet, because cook add a fruity smells.
>>> Some food smell very sweet because the cook adds a fruity flavoring/seasing.
3. Fruity makes people feel fresh!
>>> Fruity scent makes people feel fresh.

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