I Love Korean Food

2012-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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Korean food is very delicious and healthy. They have kimchi.But Bimbimbob and Galbi,bulgogi,too!! Bimbimbob means mix a lot of ingredients. Galbi is using pork! Bulgogi is using beef!! They are delicious too!

강사 첨삭

I can see that you are really fond of eating Korean food! Wow! I am glad to hear that you appreciate your own traditional foods. I wish that someday, you will send me packages of those foods. I\'m just kidding. Anyway, thank you for your composition. I enjoyed reading it. I\'ll see you in class! T. Grace Here are my corrections: Korean food is very delicious and healthy.>>>Korean foods are very delicious and healthy. They have kimchi. >>>We have kimchi. But Bimbimbob and Galbi,bulgogi,too!! >>>but Bimbimbob, Galbi, and Bulgogi are delicious and healthy too!Bimbimbob means mix a lot of ingredients.>>>Bimbimbob means mixed ingredients. Galbi is using pork! >>>Pork is the main ingredient for Golbi.Bulgogi is using beef!! >>>Bulgogi uses beef.They are delicious too! >>>Both are delicious too!

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