I love my life

2022-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Sometimes I\'m think about if I can go back my past, but everytime my answer is I want leave just now. Because I love these day and interest. I\'m looking forward to my future and wondering. If I have a go back to past travel chance, I can\'t use it. I love now my life.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann:)

It\'s nice to see that you are very contented with the life that you have right now. :)

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Sometimes I\'m think about if I can go back my past, but everytime my answer is I want leave just now.

> Sometimes I think about going back to the past but every time I do that, I realize that I just want to stay in the present.

Because I love these day and interest.

>> It is because I am loving the things that are happening now.

I\'m looking forward to my future and wondering.

>> I\'m looking forward and wondering about my future.

If I have a go back to past travel chance, I can\'t use it.

>> If I have the chance to go back in time, I won\'t do it.

I love now my life.

>> I love my life now.

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