I love my mice that I am breeding.

2019-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

And I love my family. I love my toy that I bought a long time ago. They always give me a joy. I love my country and my home and my neighbors. I love God that I worship in the church every Sunday. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello again, Wee!

Thanks again for doing your homework!

Great composition!

Keep writing ☺

And I love my family.
>> I also love my family.

I love my toy that I bought a long time ago.
>> CORRECT

They always give me a joy.
>> They always give me joy.

>> OR: They always make me happy.

I love my country and my home and my neighbors.
>> I love my country, my home, and my neighbors.

I love God that I worship in the church every Sunday.
>> I love God who I worship in church every Sunday.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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