I love nature.

2020-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Gabby! I like greenery. Green is good eyes and relax my [이름]d. I climb the mountain for my healty. That has fresh air a lot. Many Korean like to climb the mountain. People wear mountain sportswear. It\'s expensive. They wear famous maker like compete. I don\'t understand them. I know it\'s their style. They climb the mountain to holiday with their family or their friends. Anyway I go to the mountain nearby for my healthy. I am tired a lot. I will go to the bed early. Bye bye. From Susan.

강사 첨삭

Hi Suzan. Great work. Keep it up.

- T. Gabby :)

Hi Gabby!
>> Correct,
I like greenery.

>> I like green.

Green is good eyes and relax my [이름]d.

>> Green is good for my eyes and it relaxes my [이름]d,
I climb the mountain for my healty. That has fresh air a lot.

>> I climb the mountain for my health and so I can breathe some fresh air.
Many Korean like to climb the mountain.

>> Many Korean people like to climb the mountain.

People wear mountain sportswear.

>> Correct.
It\'s expensive. They wear famous maker like compete.

>> They wear expensive one like they\'ll compete.
I don\'t understand them. I know it\'s their style.

>> Correct.
They climb the mountain to holiday with their family or their friends.

>> They climb the mountain on a holiday with their family or their friends.
Anyway I go to the mountain nearby for my healthy.
>> Anyway I go to the mountain nearby for my health.
I am tired a lot. I will go to the bed early.

>> I am so tired today. I will go to bed early.
Bye bye.

>> Correct.

From Susan.

>> Correct.

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