I love summer

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Here are my corrections for you:

My favorite season is summer. until two years ago, I really loved winter.

>> My favorite season is summer, but two years ago, I really loved winter.

Because we can wear lots of fashion items to keep out the cold.

>> I loved winter before because we can wear lots of fashion items to keep out the cold.
but getting older, I feel the cold more. so I don\'t love winter anymore.

 >> Getting older, I feel the cold more, so I don\'t love winter anymore.

I love summer. while I feel the cold well, I can\'t feel hot.

>> I love summer because I get cold easily but I don\'t get hot easily.
Many poeple hate summer because of hot. But I can go wherever in summer... 

>> My people hate summer because of the warm weather, but I can go anywhere in this season.

I became to like summer.

>> That is why I have come to like summer.