I love the local food.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. When I go somewhere, I like to taste the local food. Because some people travel because they want to taste the local food. Food also shows the culture of a country or region. And I went to Vietnam and tried really good food. The rice noodles and meat-wrapped noodles I ate in Vietnam were really delicious. I definitely want to eat again.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Yes. When I go somewhere, I like to taste the local food.
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Because some people travel because they want to taste the local food.
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Food also shows the culture of a country or region.
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And I went to Vietnam and tried really good food.
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The rice noodles and meat-wrapped noodles I ate in Vietnam were really delicious.
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I definitely want to eat again.
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