I love the people who know exactly what they want
학생이 쓴 원문
I love the people who know exactly what they want.
I also keep looking for what I want in my life.
When I was in Australia,I met some great people.
They know exactly what they want and they are doing well
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름] I totally agree on your composition. The first thing to be happy is actually to establish what we want in life, and do everything that we can to achieve that. Have fun with what you want, and see you in class! =)
I love the people who know exactly what they want.
>>> I love people who know exactly what they want.I also keep looking for what I want in my life.
>>> CorrectWhen I was in Australia,I met some great people.
>>>CorrectThey know exactly what they want and they are doing well
>>>Correct
>>>OR: They know exactly what they want and they are doing well about it.
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