I love this new year!
학생이 쓴 원문
You know everyone does like new year right? This new year was the best. I got the chance to go to 2 different theme parks! Eek! I\\\'ll do an imaginary tour for you. Hop on! 1 piso for a whole ride! Vroom vroom~First stop: Samsung Co-Ex. There\\\'s aquariums, mini zoos, and mini amuesment playgrounds! It\\\'s 4 times bigger than the Times Square! Lets move on. VROOM~ Second stop: Lotte world! It\\\'s a theme park that has over 30 different rides! Atlantis is the best one. It goes topsy-turvey untill it plummets down to a screeching stop. It hurts me ears ya know. Oh no! My mind is fading away! I need to end the tour. Bye!
P.S. Here\\\'s all the pesos people gave me --> 💰
강사 첨삭
Hello Heather! I\'m glad to her that you have fun this year. I\'m sure you will also enjoy your new year. Have a great new year with your family. I will see you next year! ~ T. Lyn
You know everyone does like new year right?
>>You know everyone loves the new year, right?
This new year was the best.
>>I think this year has been good and next year will be the best.
I got the chance to go to 2 different theme parks!
>>I got a chance to go to two different them parks!
Eek! I\\\'ll do an imaginary tour for you.
>>We willl do an imaginary trip for you.
Hop on!
>>Correct.
1 piso for a whole ride!
>>Only one Philippine peso for the whole ride!
Vroom vroom~First stop: Samsung Co-Ex.
>>Correct.
There\\\'s aquariums, mini zoos, and mini amuesment playgrounds!
>>There is an aquarium, mini zoo, and mini amusement playground.
It\\\'s 4 times bigger than the Times Square!
>>It is four time bigger than Times Square!
Lets move on.
>>Correct.
VROOM~ Second stop: Lotte world!
>>Correct.
It\\\'s a theme park that has over 30 different rides!
>>It is a theme park with over 30 different rides!
Atlantis is the best one.
>>Correct.
It goes topsy-turvey untill it plummets down to a screeching stop.
>>It screams and scrambles until it stops.
It hurts me ears ya know.
>>My ears hurt.
Oh no! My mind is fading away!
>>Correct.
I need to end the tour.
>>Correct.
Bye!
>>Correct.
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