I love to buy clothes:)
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These day, I love to buy kind of clothes.
Because I told you I\'m in diet.
And I\'m lose 10kg now.
So my clothes very bigger than before diet my body.
When I walk a street, I looked focus only searching the new clothes.
When I was diet before I don\'t care about a fashion and any concept.
But now I\'m very interested it.
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Hi Ann:)
Wow, I am very happy for you! That is a great achievement. ^^\\
PS: I am hoping for your fast recovery. :(
These day, I love to buy kind of clothes.
>> These days, I love buying different kinds of clothes.
Because I told you I\'m in diet.
>> I told you that I am on a diet.
And I\'m lose 10kg now.
>> I lost 10 kgs already.
So my clothes very bigger than before diet my body.
>> So my clothes are too big for me now than before.
When I walk a street, I looked focus only searching the new clothes.
>> When I walk on the streets, I focus only on searching for new clothes.
When I was diet before I don\'t care about a fashion and any concept.
>> But when I was still not on a diet, I didn\'t care about fashion at all.
But now I\'m very interested it.
>> But now, I am very interested in it.
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