I love to travel.
학생이 쓴 원문
Why is English fluency significant for you?
- As you know, English is global. If I can speak English fluently, I\'ll enjoy traveling all around the world. Also I never love to learn about something. That\'s why I study English hard.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. Everything is possible. Being fluent and excellent in speaking in English might be difficult, but it\'s possible. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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>>>> correct.
>>>> OR: As you may know, English is the global language.
If I can speak English fluently, I\'ll enjoy traveling all around the world.
>>>> correct
>>>> OR: If I can speak English fluently, I can enjoy the privilege of traveling all around the world.
Also I never love to learn about something.
>>>> correct.
>>>> OR: In addition, I\'ve never loved learning about something.
That\'s why I study English hard.
>>>> correct
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