I loved Christmas when I was young
학생이 쓴 원문
but I have changed a lot.
I\'m not excited any more Christmas day.
I have had huge worry more than Christmas excitement since than I grew up as adult
I would like to go back when I was young.. that is one of my wish
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. I think a lot of people would want to go back to when they were young. That is one of my wishes sometimes as well.^^ When there were only a few things to worry about and we just get excited for holidays like Christmas. But growing up is part of life and this is reality. Let us make the most out of the holiday and take advantage of the long weekend. :) Have a nice evening. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I loved Christmas when I was young
but I have changed a lot.
>> CORRECT =)
I\'m not excited any more Christmas day.
>> I am not excited about Christmas day anymore.
I have had huge worry more than Christmas excitement since than I grew up as adult
>> I have had more things to worry about than getting excited for Christmas ever since I grew up and became an adult.
I would like to go back when I was young.. that is one of my wish
>> I would like to go back to when I was young, that is one of my wishes.
I loved Christmas when I was young
but I have changed a lot.
>> CORRECT =)
I\'m not excited any more Christmas day.
>> I am not excited about Christmas day anymore.
I have had huge worry more than Christmas excitement since than I grew up as adult
>> I have had more things to worry about than getting excited for Christmas ever since I grew up and became an adult.
I would like to go back when I was young.. that is one of my wish
>> I would like to go back to when I was young, that is one of my wishes.
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