I'm a little bit relieved.
학생이 쓴 원문
On seeing news of this disaster of Japan, I tried to contact by facebook all of my friends in Japan.
I knew my friends lived far from the accident place but I couldn't get any words from them last weekend.
During the absence of their message, I was really worried.
However, I got all of them today at last. Fortunately,they and their people are okay.
I'm angry at the attitue of some people.
There are various reactions in Korea.
They differ from one another extremely.
Most of us hope to pass and be going well for Japan.
But a few immature people has written trerrible words on the Internet.
They said our sad history, but what would we differ from them if we were happy to see the death and get benefits?
I feel ashamed as Korean
Anyway, I hope Korean to give Japan a helpful hand.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Yeah! It is really terrible.
So do I. I have been staying late checking the updates online.
I was somehow worried about the nuclear plant that exploded since the rumor that Asian countries are affected by it.
But thanks to twitter and facebook I am able to find out what뭩 true and what뭩 not.
-Tiny^0^
On seeing news of this disaster of Japan, I tried to contact by facebook all of my friends in Japan.
>>Upon seeing the news of the disaster in Japan, I tried to contact by facebook all of my friends in Japan.
I knew my friends lived far from the accident place but I couldn't get any words from them last weekend.
>>correctDuring the absence of their message, I was really worried.
>>correctHowever, I got all of them today at last.
>> However, I got messages from all of them today at last.
Fortunately, they and their people are okay.
>>correctI'm angry at the attitue of some people.
>> I'm angry at the attitue of some people.
>>spelling check: attitudeThere are various reactions in Korea.
>>correctThey differ from one another extremely.
>>correctMost of us hope to pass and be going well for Japan.
>> Most of us hope Japan to pass and be going well.
But a few immature people has written trerrible words on the Internet.
>> But a few immature people has written terrible words on the Internet.
>>spelling check: terribleThey said our sad history, but what would we differ from them if we were happy to see the death and get benefits?
>> They said our sad history, but how would we differ from them if we were happy to see the death and get benefits?I feel ashamed as Korean
>>correctAnyway, I hope Korean to give Japan a helpful hand.
>> Anyway, I hope Korean will give Japan a helpful hand.
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