I'm a ruler
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could rule the world for one day, I will give 1,000,000 dollars to everyone.
I'm pretty sure peoples would be happy because they need to money to happy. Therefore I will be ruler.
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
I was quite sad because I was not able to talk to you yesterday.
I have to look forward to Monday.
Thanks for sending in your homework today.
I am sure that you will be a very generous ruler kkkk
See you!
~Teacher Becca~
Here are some corrections:
If I could rule the world for one day, I will give 1,000,000 dollars to everyone.
>> correct!
>> OR: If I could rule the world for a day, I will give everyong 1,000,000 dollars.I\'m pretty sure peoples would be happy because they need to money to happy.
>> I\'m pretty sure that people will be happy because they need money to be happy.
>> OR: I\'m pretty sure that people will be happy, because money makes them happy.
Therefore I will be ruler.
>> Therefore, I will be a ruler.
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