I'm a ruler

2014-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Becca

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If I could rule the world for one day, I will give 1,000,000 dollars to everyone. I'm pretty sure peoples would be happy because they need to money to happy. Therefore I will be ruler.

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]!   I was quite sad because I was not able to talk to you yesterday. I have to look forward to Monday. Thanks for sending in your homework today. I am sure that you will be a very generous ruler kkkk   See you!   ~Teacher Becca~ Here are some corrections:   If I could rule the world for one day, I will give 1,000,000 dollars to everyone. >> correct! >> OR: If I could rule the world for a day, I will give everyong 1,000,000 dollars.I\'m pretty sure peoples would be happy because they need to money to happy. >> I\'m pretty sure that people will be happy because they need money to be happy. >> OR: I\'m pretty sure that people will be happy, because money makes them happy. Therefore I will be ruler. >> Therefore, I will be a ruler.

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