I'm a singer

2011-05-06 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Ella. Actually, I'm not a singer hoohohohoho;; "I'm a singer" is popular tv show in Korea nowadays. In this show, 6 singers compete their singing skill. A singer who receive the lowest score, must get out of stage. Nowadays, I don't enough time to study at all. Because my manager who work with me resigned 15days ago. So I have taken care of not only my own works, but also works that the manager had worked. That's why I always tell you, "I'm tired". From now on, I study English harder than before. I promise it. Please like me more than 2AM kikiki~ Have a nice weekend~

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름] [이름]!
Why are you laughing like Santa Claus?hahaha Anyway, I think that show you told me about is like the American Idol where the singer or contestant with the lowest score and voice will be ousted.hehehe
I understand why you are always tire. You work so hard. Your girlfriend is lucky because you will be very rich.hehehe
And don't worry, I already like your voice more than 2am.hahaha.
Enjoy your weekend!
~T. Ella^^

Hello Ella.
>>Hello, Ella.
Actually, I'm not a singer hoohohohoho;;
>>Actually, I뭢 not a singer. Hohohohoho. [Why do you laugh like Santa Claus, [이름] [이름]?hahaha]
"I'm a singer" is popular tv show in Korea nowadays.
>>봊뭢 a singer

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