I\'m afraid:(

2022-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

I\'m afraid getting older now. When I was very young, 26 years old is feels like perfectly adult and get a lot of money. But now when I look at me myself I\'m still young. Like a baby. Time has passed and I\'m still the same as I am. I wish I could grow up together according to my age.

강사 첨삭

Hi Anne!

That\'s good! Getting old is a very natural thing. As we grow older, the wiser we get as well. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I\'m afraid getting older now.

>> CORRECT

When I was very young, 26 years old is feels like perfectly adult and get a lot of money.

>> When I was very young, 26 years old is feels like an adult and they get a lot of money.

But now when I look at me myself I\'m still young.

>> But if I look at myself now, I still look young like a baby.

Like a baby.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

Time has passed and I\'m still the same as I am.

>> CORRECT

I wish I could grow up together according to my age.

>> I wish I could grow up accordingly to my age.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기