I’m afraid of the dark

2023-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Don

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I’m afraid of the dark. When I go to bed, I turn on the light of hallway to shine the light through in my door. I’m also afraid of Fun House because it is very dark. However, I like night city view.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Happy Monday! See you later ^^

T. DON

I’m afraid of the dark. When I go to bed, I turn on the light of hallway to shine the light through in my door. I’m also afraid of Fun House because it is very dark. However, I like night city view.
>> I’m afraid of the dark. When I go to bed, I turn on the light of our hallway to shine the light through my slightly open door. I’m also afraid of Fun House because it is very dark. However, I like the night city view.

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