I’m curious about what the future society looks like.
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I’m curious about what the future society looks like.
Especially, in Korea, many people don’t want to have children.
So, I have questions like ‘Will school disappear?’, or ‘Wouldn’t the teacher play a point role?‘.
I want to know that answers and find the answer what I can do as a teacher.
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Hi Kara!
Especially, in Korea, many people don’t want to have children.
So, I have questions like ‘Will school disappear?’, or ‘Wouldn’t the teacher play a point role?‘.
I want to know that answers and find the answer what I can do as a teacher.
I really like your answer.
It is on point; it is one of the current social problems that Korea is facing.
It would definitely personally affect your future.
Andrea
I’m curious about what the future society looks like.
>> Correct
Especially, in Korea, many people don’t want to have children.
>> Especially in Korea, many people don’t want to have children.
So, I have questions like ‘Will school disappear?’, or ‘Wouldn’t the teacher play a point role?‘.
>> So, I have questions like, \" Will schools shut down? \" or, \"Wouldn\'t teachers play a special role?\"
I want to know that answers and find the answer what I can do as a teacher.
>> I want to know and find the answers as a future teacher.
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