i'm disapointed with your uncautious doing.
학생이 쓴 원문
I did not receive a call because my cable phone was instanly broken. However I did not know it by receiving your messenger through cell phone.
I think if you know something is wrong, you need to try to call to cell phone.
I knew you were absent if anything.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sir [이름],
Good evening sir and I would like to apologize for not calling you on your mobile because your telephone is not working.
I called several times on your telephone and it was not ringing, since you are enrolled on a telephone class I am not allowed to call you
on your mobile without any endorsement from my managers. We follow certain rules in our company and I am sorry if this caused you
disappointment. I hope that tomorrow, I would be able to talk to you on your telephone. Sorry again and hope you understand.
See you and have a good evening^^
Teacher May
I did not receive a call because my cable phone was instanly broken.
>> I didn\'t receive any call from you because my cable phone was broken.
However I did not know it by receiving your messenger.>> You mean to say: However, I did not notice it until I received your message about my attendance today.
I think if something is wrong, you need to try to call to cellura phone.>> I think if something\'s wrong, you need to try calling my cellular phone.I knew you were absent if anything.
>>I thought you were absent or there was something.
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