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-What are the beautiful places that you have visited in Korea? Explain your answer in as much detail as you can.
IHave you ever been to Busan in Korea? It is a big city. Long time ago. I visited in there. If you go there, you could feel a unique mood in the town through the people and views. Especialy, I like the beach of Haewoundae. Alough there are sevral beaches in there, It has a conbination between a downtown feel and a countryside. It has surly beautiful big beach and clean water.
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Have you ever been to Busan in Korea?
>> CORRECT!
It is a big city.
>> CORRECT!
Long time ago. I visited in there.
>> A long time ago, I visited there.
If you go there, you could feel a unique mood in the town through the people and views.
>> CORRECT!
Especialy, I like the beach of Haewoundae.
>> I especially like the beach of Haewoundae.
Alough there are sevral beaches in there, It has a conbination between a downtown feel and a countryside.
>> Although there are several beaches there, it has a combination of downtown and countryside feel.
It has surly beautiful big beach and clean water.
>> It surely has a beautiful, big beach and clean water.
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