I\'m doing my homework...^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Teacher~~^^ I pressed a delay button for my mistake. So I was waiting for your call. Your schedule was so full that I couldn\'t study with you.
How does what you eat affect your mental health?
As far as I concerned, depending on what I eat, it affect my mental health. That\'s why when my stress relieved when sometimes I drink a glass of beer with a delicious food. The other thing is I prefer some foods that is filled of the care of a chef to Bibimbap that I made in person when I feel sad. I think It contains a lot of nutrients so It gives me more energy. So I recommend when you feel sad, go outside and eat very delicious food.^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! first of all, I want to sincerely apologize for calling you late by mistake. I didn\'t mean to make wait. :( By the way, thank you for expressing your opinion about how does what we eat affect our mental health and also, thank you for your suggestion, I do that as well especially when I feel not okay as food makes me feel better sometimes. I hope to see you soon! Thank you and keep safe!
~T. Annie
Teacher~~^^ I pressed a delay button for my mistake.
>> Teacher I pressed the delay button by mistake.
So I was waiting for your call.
>>I was waiting for your call.
Your schedule was so full that I couldn\'t study with you.
>> Your schedule might be so full that I couldn\'t study with you.
How does what you eat affect your mental health?
>>Correct!
As far as I concerned, depending on what I eat, it affect my mental health.
>> As far as I am concerned, depending on what I eat affects my mental health.
That\'s why when my stress relieved when sometimes I drink a glass of beer with a delicious food.
>>Sometimes, when I drink a glass of beer with a delicious meal, it relieves my stress.
The other thing is I prefer some foods that is filled of the care of a chef to Bibimbap that I made in person when I feel sad.
>> Another thing is that I prefer foods like Bibimbap that are filled with love and personally made by a chef when I feel sad.
I think It contains a lot of nutrients so It gives me more energy.
>> Correct!
So I recommend when you feel sad, go outside and eat very delicious food.^^
>> When you feel sad, I suggest you to to go out and eat some delicious food.
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