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2010-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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My dean is not here. He left for a business trip to seoul yesterday evening. So I can study english at leisure and I can have a lunch early. Actually I love the last one than the first one. I told you I have a voracious appetite. I am always waiting for lunch time. I have a slim figure but I have a little body fat because of my eating habits. I like snacks and junk food like pizza and hamburger. But most of all, my favoritings, alchol and side dishes, make me having love handles. So when I choose clothes I cannot but consider my shape. Now I am wearing tight black pullover which is a magic clothes. Whenever I am wearing it people say " wow! you are so slim" I don't like to hear that I am skinny but I like to hear that I am slim.

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! I think we have the same problem. Because I have a slim body plus the fact that I am quite tall so some people say that I need to eat more. But I eat a lot!!! ^^ And you뭨e right it is irritating to hear people say that I am skinny. But the most important thing is being yourself. Don뭪 pay too much attention to what other people say. That뭩 what I do. ^^ See you on Friday J!!LeiJ My dean is not here.>>correctHe left for a business trip to Seoul yesterday evening.>>correctSo I can study english at leisure and I can have lunch early.>>correctActually I love the last one than the first one.>>correctI told you I have a voracious appetite.>>correctI am always waiting for lunch time.>>correct >>I always look forward for lunch break (better)I have a slim figure but I have a little body fat because of my eating habits.>>correctI like snacks and junk foods like pizza and hamburger.>>correctBut most of all, my favoritings, alchol and side dishes, make me having love handles.>>But most of all, my favorite things like alcohol and finger foodsSo when I choose clothes I cannot but consider my shape.>>correctNow I am wearing tight black pullover which is a magic clothe.>>correctWhenever I am wearing it people say " wow! you are so slim">>correctI don't like to hear that I am skinny but I like to hear that I am slim. >>correct

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