I\'m happy!!!!!!!!!!!!

2021-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

학생이 쓴 원문

yesterday, My friend send the massages me. \'Hey, would you play bend???\' actually, I want to play music bend for a long time. I have the special chance!! I decided to play guitar. I want to play drums, but It is impossible. That is because bend leader play the drums!! I\'m okay, I love guitar as many as drums.. I\'m happy now!!!

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

Yesterday, My friend send the massages me. \'Hey, would you play in a band???\'
>>Yesterday, My friend asked me a question. He asked, \"hey, would you like to play in a band???\'

actually, I want to play music bend for a long time.

>>Actually, I\'ve been wanting to play in a music band for a long time.

I have the special chance!!

>>Now, I have the chance to do it!

I decided to play guitar. I want to play drums, but It is impossible.

>>I decided to play the guitar. I also wanted to play the drums, but it s impossible.

That is because bend leader play the drums!!

>>That is because the band leader plays the drums!!

I\'m okay, I love guitar as many as drums..

>>It\'s okay though, I love the guitar as well as how I love playing drums..

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