I'm in PC room.
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm in PC room with my carolyn.
You already noticed it, but I tell you.
Today is the holliday for us, so It is just like a 3 day weekand.
I'm very happy.
We have a lot of time so carolyn wants to maintain her car in the repairing shop.
The owner of repairing shop already know Carolyn's face because she visited that place 3 times in last weekdays. Since she bought her car in used car shop, the car needs reparing.
Today she want to change some part of the engine, which takes about 4 hours.
So, I persuade her to go PC room.
you know my laptop computer is out of control. so I need computer to submit my home work.
I'm not sure I can re-check my homework in today, but maybe, I can check these homworks in a next year? kk...
anyway, I could'nt understand the meaning of what you write on the homwork.
Pleas let me know tha meaning of "can make a difference in the world"
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thanks for always finding time to do your essay.
Can make a difference in the world means \"change\".
What changes could it bring? I hope you were able to get it.
But don\'t worry, we can discuss this later in class.
I am so happy that you are with Carolyn. ^_^ I\'m sure that you are really happy.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
I\'m in PC room with my carolyn.
>> Correct ( Capitalization of words: Carloyn ^^ )You already noticed it, but I tell you.
>> You already noticed it, but I want to tell you. Today is the holliday for us, so It is just like a 3 day weekand.
>> Today is holiday for us, so it\'s like a three day weekend.
>> OR: Today is our holiday so it\'s like an extended weekend.I\'m very happy.
>> CorrectWe have a lot of time so carolyn wants to maintain her car in the repairing shop.
>> We have a lot of time so, Carolyn wants to maintain her car in a repair shop.The owner of repairing shop already know Carolyn\'s face because she visited that place 3 times in last weekdays.
>> The owner of the repair shop already knows Carolyn\'s face because she visited that place three times last week/
Since she bought her car in used car shop, the car needs reparing.
>> Since she bought her car in a used car shop, it needs repair.
We have a lot of time so carolyn wants to maintain her car in the repairing shop.
>> We have a lot of time so she brought it there. Today she want to change some part of the engine, which takes about 4 hours.
>> She wants to change some parts of the engine, which takes about four hours. So, I persuade her to go PC room.
>> So, I persuaded her to go to the PC room.you know my laptop computer is out of control. so I need computer to submit my home work.
>> You know that my laptop computer is not working well, so I need a computer to submit my homework. I\'m not sure I can re-check my homework in today, but maybe, I can check these homworks in a next year? kk...
>> I\'m not sure if I can check my homework again today. But may, I can do it next year. anyway, I could\'nt understand the meaning of what you write on the homwork.
>> Anyway, I couldn\'t understand the meaning of what you wrote on the homework. Pleas let me know tha meaning of \"can make a difference in the world\"
>> Please let me know the meaning of \" Can make a different in the world\".
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