I\'m interested in home interior.

2019-08-15 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

I\'ll be getting married in November that\'s why I\'m interested in home interior. I really want to make my home cozy and comfortable. My hobby is go to cafe and have dessert and coffee. I even go there alone and enjoy the time leading books and studying English. Finally I decided to decorate my loving home like cafe mood. I\'ll buy coffee machine. I want to learn baking. If my family and friends visit my home, I\'ll serve them. I hope them enjoy their happy time in my home.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! How are you?

I am also excited for you! Seems like you\'re the happiest woman today.

Keep that positive mind. By the way, I want you to remember this.

House and Home difference:

A house is a building or a physical structure, whether there are people living or it\'s empty.

Example: I am going to build a house. / They are in my house now.

Home is the place where a person lives or where they feel that they belong. It has more emotional

associations.

Example: I will decorate my loving home. / There\'s no place like home.

~~Teacher May~~

I\'ll be getting married in November that\'s why I\'m interested in home interior. I really want to make my home cozy and comfortable.

>> CORRECT
 My hobby is go to cafe and have dessert and coffee.

>> My hobby is going to the cafe and have a dessert and coffee.

I even go there alone and enjoy the time leading books and studying English.

>> I even go there alone. I enjoy the time reading books and studying English.
 Finally I decided to decorate my loving home like cafe mood.

>> Finally, I decided to decorate my loving home that feels like in cafe.

I\'ll buy coffee machine. I want to learn baking.

>> CORRECT
If my family and friends visit my home, I\'ll serve them.

>> If my family and friends visit my house, I\'ll serve them.

I hope them enjoy their happy time in my home.

>> I hope that they would enjoy their happy time in my house.

or >> I hope that they would enjoy their happy time at home.

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