I'm late...~

Hi there Ms. [이름]! 

You are really late. 
Me to actually. hahaha

So sorry about that. 
I have to finish also the homework of my students who did it first. 

Anyway, please read the corrections below. 

I hope I understood your thoughts. 

Thanks thanks! 

Always, 
Kathrine ^^

4. What do you want to do in our company.

I think the most important thing is management of buyer that businessed at present.

>> I think that the most important thing is the management of buyers who are doing business at present. 

Because it creats a new supply in stable relationship.

>> Because it creates a new supply for a stable relationship. 

By managing our buyer\'s trends, I will respond to change of demend.

>> By managing our buyer\'s trend, I will respond to the change of demand. 

This way will build trust and our company will be achieve recognition.

>> This way will build trust and our company will achieve recognition. 

>> or: This way will build trust and our company will be achieving recognition. 

I put all my energy into your company.

>> I will put all my energy into your company. 

5.What do you know about this industry?

I know that a mechanical parts market is active in exporting not only domestic market but also a plant site of developing

country or a America market.

>> I know that a market of mechanical parts is active in exporting not only in domestic market but also in a plant site of  developing countries or an American market. 

especially, there are many companies to manufacturing mechenical parts in Chang-Won.

>> Especially, there are many companies manufacturing mechanical parts in Chang-Won. 

So I usually read local newspaper to get information and grasp trends.

>> So I usually read local newspapers to get information and grasps trends. 

I learned each country\'s business characteristics, the exchange rate and trade process.

>> I learned each country\'s business characteristics, exchanges rates and trade processes. 

Through this leaning, I can understand to work fast, and It makes me easy to adjust.

>> Through this learning, I  was able to understand how to work fast and it makes me easy to adjust. 

1.Poland used to be a communist country.

>> correct! 

2.He\'s a good friend of mine.

>>  correct! 

 3.Tom signed the back of the check.

>>  correct! 

4.The American hymn is called \"The Star Spangled Banner.\"

>> The American national anthem is called \"The Star Spangled Banner.\" 

5.Don\'t drive in the passing line!

>> Don\'t drive in the passing lane! 

6.This is a two-lanes highway.

>> This is a two-lane highway.

7.Not really. It\'s an antiquated expression.

>> correct! 

8.I am 37 years old.

>>  correct! 

9.I\'m 37.

>>  correct! 

10.Mary is a single again.

>> Mary is single again.