I\'m living in dongtan
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I\'m living that korea of Hwaseong City by Dongtan.
2.the Dongtan, they have SAMSUNG company
3.The Dongtan have a very many apartments and students
4.The Dongtan city is very cleanliness and have very many cars
5.The Dongtan have very many Academy
6.Finally, The Dongtan have a waterside park and there are very good to walking
강사 첨삭
1. I\'m living that korea of Hwaseong City by Dongtan.
2.the Dongtan, they have SAMSUNG company
3.The Dongtan have a very many apartments and students
4.The Dongtan city is very cleanliness and have very many cars
5.The Dongtan have very many Academy
6.Finally, The Dongtan have a waterside park and there are very good to walking
>> I\'m living in Hwaseong City of Dongtan, Korea.
2.the Dongtan, they have SAMSUNG company
>> Samsung is in Dongtan.
3.The Dongtan have a very many apartments and students
>> Dongtan has many apartments and students.
4.The Dongtan city is very cleanliness and have very many cars
>> It is very clean though there are many cars.
5.The Dongtan have very many Academy
>> It has many academies.
6.Finally, The Dongtan have a waterside park and there are very good to walking
>> Finally, it has a waterside park which is a very good place for walking.
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