I'm living in loney day.

2011-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sally

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, sally good to see you again through this text. I really really wanna have a good skill to speak in english. But, I don't have not enough time to study english. Nevertheless, I should try again even if I have not enough time to study, because I need it, want it through this page of feedback. So, could you help me? up to have a good ability to speak in english. This is an earnest request. thx to read this text, and I appreciate u'r concern for this. Have a nice day, and see you next morning bye~ ^^

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]^^ Don't be lonely. You should always be happy. Anyway, with your request,I am very happy to help. I will put more corrections for oyu to improve your English skills. Just keep oin working very hard and I will be guiding you. Take good care always. I'll speak with you on Monday! - T.Sally -   I'm living in lonely day >>I'm living in a lonely day. Hi, sally good to see you again through this text. >>Hi sally. It's good to see you again through this text.  I really really wanna have a good skill to speak in english. >>I really want to have good English speaking skills.  But, I don't have not enough time to study english. >>Correct!  Nevertheless, I should try again even if I have not enough time to study, because I need it, want it through this pageof feedback. >>Neverthelessm I should try again even if I don't have anought time to study, because I need it and want it throught the feedback page.  So, could you help me? up to have a good ability to speak in english. >>So sould you help me until I have good English speaking ability? This is an earnest request. >>correct  thx to read this text, and I appreciate u'r concern for this. >>Thanks for reading this test, I appreciate your concern about this.  Have a nice day, and see you next morning bye~ ^^ >>Correct

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