I'm living in loney day.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, sally good to see you again through this text.
I really really wanna have a good skill to speak in english.
But, I don't have not enough time to study english.
Nevertheless, I should try again even if I have not enough
time to study, because I need it, want it through this page
of feedback.
So, could you help me? up to have a good ability to speak in
english. This is an earnest request.
thx to read this text, and I appreciate u'r concern for this.
Have a nice day, and see you next morning bye~ ^^
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]^^ Don't be lonely. You should always be happy. Anyway, with your request,I am very happy to help. I will put more corrections for oyu to improve your English skills. Just keep oin working very hard and I will be guiding you. Take good care always.
I'll speak with you on Monday!
- T.Sally -
I'm living in lonely day
>>I'm living in a lonely day.
Hi, sally good to see you again through this text.
>>Hi sally. It's good to see you again through this text.
I really really wanna have a good skill to speak in english.
>>I really want to have good English speaking skills.
But, I don't have not enough time to study english.
>>Correct!
Nevertheless, I should try again even if I have not enough time to study, because I need it, want it through this pageof feedback.
>>Neverthelessm I should try again even if I don't have anought time to study, because I need it and want it throught the feedback page.
So, could you help me? up to have a good ability to speak in english.
>>So sould you help me until I have good English speaking ability?
This is an earnest request.
>>correct
thx to read this text, and I appreciate u'r concern for this.
>>Thanks for reading this test, I appreciate your concern about this.
Have a nice day, and see you next morning bye~ ^^
>>Correct
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