I\'m mistaken for a YouTuber\'s name!

2019-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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I\'m mistaken for a YouTuber\'s name! They are heavytalker. Maybe you can find them easily when typing this in Korean! It would be 하말넘많. Heavy talker consists of two women and they majored in video art. I think they represent the Korean radical feminist\'s stance. Literally, they talk about anything about women\'s issues. These days they made contents titled \'Defaultrip\'. As you can know it intuitively, this is the compound word Default + Trip. As I mentioned to you \'Corset free\' or \'Off the Corset\' movement is quite a big issue in Korea. To lessen the women\'s dolled-up and resist the sexual objectification, the radical feminists are trying to remove their make-up, cut their hair and wear comfortable and practical clothes. So in their content, Default means The women who are out of the traditional girlish style. They traveled a lot of (maybe?) country without any make-up and uncomfortable clothes. They also discuss the economic issue and hidden discrimination! I hope you enjoy it!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]! 
Thank you for the update and the introduction about the group. I had no time to watch their videos yet but I will make sure to do so on the weekend. ^^ Their background really is interesting and I\'m really proud to see women trying to break away from the social norms that were set for them. See you later in class today! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

1. I\'m mistaken for a YouTuber\'s name! They are heavytalker. Maybe you can find them easily when typing this in Korean! 
>>>I\'ve made a mistake about the YouTuber\'s name. They are named heavytalker. Maybe you can find them easily when typing this in Korean! 
2. It would be 하말넘많.
>>>CORRECT!
3. Heavy talker consists of two women and they majored in video art. I think they represent the Korean radical feminist\'s stance.
>>>CORRECT!
4. Literally, they talk about anything about women\'s issues.
>>>CORRECT!
5. These days they made contents titled \'Defaultrip\'. As you can know it intuitively, this is the compound word Default + Trip.
>>>These days they made contents entitled \'Defaultrip\'. As you can intuitively know, this is the compound word Default + Trip.
6. As I mentioned to you \'Corset free\' or \'Off the Corset\' movement is quite a big issue in Korea.
>>>CORRECT!
7. To lessen the women\'s dolled-up and resist the sexual objectification, the radical feminists are trying to remove their make-up, cut their hair and wear comfortable and practical clothes. So in their content, Default means The women who are out of the traditional girlish style. They traveled a lot of (maybe?) country without any make-up and uncomfortable clothes.
>>>To lessen the women\'s dolled-up image and resist the sexual objectification, the radical feminists are trying to remove their make-up, cut their hair and wear comfortable and practical clothes. So in their content, Default means the women who do not conform with the traditional girlish style. They traveled to a lot of countries without any make-up and uncomfortable clothes.
9. They also discuss the economic issue and hidden discrimination! I hope you enjoy it!
>>>CORRECT!

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