i'm not a lucky girl.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, I hope that your doing fine now. Just think positive, in time everything will be ok.:)All of us encounter that kind of situation, all we have to do is to make our self strong all the time to face all the problems we have in life.
Today, my feeling was not good.
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Because i had some problems.
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Although i tried to overcome my problems, it was very difficult to me.
>>>Although, I tried to overcome my problems, it was still very difficult to me.
Anyway, i just tried to focus on studying.
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So i went to library in my town.
>>>So, I went to the library here in my town.
But, it was like curse.
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Today, the library closed.... i was shocked about that..
>>>But I was shocked because the library is closed.
Actually, the library closes only two times of one month.
>>>Actually, the library closes only two times in one month
it is once in a blue moon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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that's why my feeling was more more not good...
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today, i was a very pitiful girl..
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