I'm not a sweet daughter.

2010-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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When I was a child I had a good relationship with my father. But unfortunately not now, It makes me sad. In former days we had a bond of sympathy I was a best student and he was very proud of me. But I was not able to meet the expectations of my father after graduation. So I have a guilty conscience it was a hard time for me. These days we get along just fine together but I can't seem to back to the good old days. When I was a child I don't know why feel elders some lonely and sad. But I'm getting the feel of it because I am a grown-up already. As I get older I feel responsible for various roles. I am a daughter, a girlfreind, a frind, a sister, and a staff. Am I able to meet all the expectation? I don't know I just do. ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! Don't feel bad about yourself. It is normal for other 't change your personality just to please someone. Adjust yes, but change no. Cheer up girl! Have a great weekend!!! Take care! Lei J   When I was a child I had a good relationship with my father. >>correct But unfortunately not now, It makes me sad. >>But unfortunately, not anymore and it makes me feel sad. In former days we had a bond of sympathy I was the best student and he was very proud of me. >>correct But I was not able to meet the expectations of my father after graduation. >>correct So I have a guilty conscience it was a hard time for me. >>correct These days we get along just fine together but I can't seem to back to the good old days. >>these days we get along just fine, but I can't seem to bring back the old days. When I was a child I don't know why feel elders some lonely and sad. >>When I was a child, I don't know why some elders feel lonely and sad. But I'm getting the feel of it because I am a grown-up already. >>correct As I get older I feel responsible for various roles. >>correct I am a daughter, a girlfriend, a friend, a sister, and a staff. >>correct Am I able to meet all their expectation? >>correct I don't know I just do. ^^ >>correct

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