I'm not a sweet daughter.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a child I had a good relationship with my father.
But unfortunately not now, It makes me sad.
In former days we had a bond of sympathy I was a best student and
he was very proud of me.
But I was not able to meet the expectations of my father after
graduation.
So I have a guilty conscience it was a hard time for me.
These days we get along just fine together but I can't seem to back
to the good old days.
When I was a child I don't know why feel elders some lonely and sad.
But I'm getting the feel of it because I am a grown-up already.
As I get older I feel responsible for various roles.
I am a daughter, a girlfreind, a frind, a sister, and a staff.
Am I able to meet all the expectation?
I don't know I just do. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi J!!! Don't feel bad about yourself. It is normal for other 't change your personality just to please someone. Adjust yes, but change no. Cheer up girl! Have a great weekend!!! Take care!
Lei J
When I was a child I had a good relationship with my father.
>>correct
But unfortunately not now, It makes me sad.
>>But unfortunately, not anymore and it makes me feel sad.
In former days we had a bond of sympathy I was the best student and he was very proud of me.
>>correct
But I was not able to meet the expectations of my father after graduation.
>>correct
So I have a guilty conscience it was a hard time for me.
>>correct
These days we get along just fine together but I can't seem to back to the good old days.
>>these days we get along just fine, but I can't seem to bring back the old days.
When I was a child I don't know why feel elders some lonely and sad.
>>When I was a child, I don't know why some elders feel lonely and sad.
But I'm getting the feel of it because I am a grown-up already.
>>correct
As I get older I feel responsible for various roles.
>>correct
I am a daughter, a girlfriend, a friend, a sister, and a staff.
>>correct
Am I able to meet all their expectation?
>>correct
I don't know I just do. ^^
>>correct
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