I\\\'m not doing anything preparing a disaster
학생이 쓴 원문
I\\\'ve got a few of a insurance which is guarantee of me when natural disaster come in
but it is not importance if I will die in disaster..
The many of peoples are in here have a lot of insurance for getting guarantee after they were dead..
I think that is really stupid to have a lot of insurance
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Hi Sir [이름]!^^
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about our essay. Stay safe all the time.
Always,
Kelly^^
I\\\'ve got a few of a insurance which is guarantee of me when natural disaster come in>> I am covered under some insurance which can help me when a disaster happens.
but it is not importance if I will die in disaster..
but it is not importance if I will die in disaster..
>> But it is not important if I die from a disaster.
The many of peoples are in here have a lot of insurance for getting guarantee after they were dead..
The many of peoples are in here have a lot of insurance for getting guarantee after they were dead..
>> Many people availed a lot of insurance which covers death.
I think that is really stupid to have a lot of insurance
I think that is really stupid to have a lot of insurance
>> I think it is really stupid to have a lot of insurance.
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