I\'m not good at technology
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I\'m not good at technology also, I\'m not good at computer. The electronic buld repairing or car repairing, if I have to do this I have to good at technology. Current, I am not good at technology, so when the computer are not working I call my father, because my father are architect, so father is good at using computer, but when I became a student in university, I have to submit the essay a lot, so I have to learn about technology hardly.
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Hello once again Maria!
In this time of technology, we need to be able to operate and be very knowledgeable about technology, particularly about computers because we will use it all the time. I am sure that you can be able to learn it quickly.
I am grateful to your answer to today\'s question. Keep writing and see you in class.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
The electronic buld repairing or car repairing, if I have to do this I have to good at technology.
>> The electronic bulb repairing or car repairing, if I have to do this I have to have a good knowledge with technology.
Current, I am not good at technology, so when the computer are not working I call my father, because my father are architect, so father is good at using computer, but when I became a student in university, I have to submit the essay a lot, so I have to learn about technology hardly.
>> Currently, I am not good at technology so when the computer is not working, I call my father, because my father is an architect. So my father is good at using computer, but when I will become a student in university, I have to submit a lot of essay so I have to learn about technology very well.
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