I\'m not such a rich person.
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m not such a rich person
I wanna earn money just as much as I can live with.
There\'s a saying which says \"If you have more, the more concerns you will have.\"
I agree with like that saying. but It is needed for me to save money to deal with some emergencies.
So I\'m depositing 10~20percent of my pay, which is for just my emergencies.
I love my life during which I can eat what I want, do what I want to.
These days I enjoy speaking English and running.
And after I started running, I want to learn swimming.
So, I\'d like to invest my self in learning many things. So I will save the money more from now on.!
강사 첨삭
Thank you Sarah!
Saving and investing are both important. We have to be wise towards saving and investing.
~Lucy
I\'m not such a rich person
>>CORRECT!
I wanna earn money just as much as I can live with.
I wanna earn money just as much as I can live with.
>>CORRECT!
There\'s a saying which says \"If you have more, the more concerns you will have.\"
There\'s a saying which says \"If you have more, the more concerns you will have.\"
>>CORRECT!
I agree with like that saying.
I agree with like that saying.
>>I agree with that saying.
but It is needed for me to save money to deal with some emergencies.
>>CORRECT!
So I\'m depositing 10~20percent of my pay, which is for just my emergencies.
So I\'m depositing 10~20percent of my pay, which is for just my emergencies.
>>CORRECT!
I love my life during which I can eat what I want, do what I want to.
I love my life during which I can eat what I want, do what I want to.
>>CORRECT!
These days I enjoy speaking English and running.
These days I enjoy speaking English and running.
>>CORRECT!
And after I started running, I want to learn swimming.
And after I started running, I want to learn swimming.
>>CORRECT!
So, I\'d like to invest my self in learning many things.
>>CORRECT!So, I\'d like to invest my self in learning many things.
So I will save the money more from now on.!
>>CORRECT!
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