I\'m not thing changed

2023-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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I can\'t changed amything because i still scary to change in my side. i could enything but i don\'t have coureage and i don\'t belive in myself. of course! i know i have chaing self, and i\'ll making a confident but some times, i want to go to the bed and i make me do nothing just sleeped in the bed forever. i think i\'m still child in my mine, i\'m just coward and i don\'t want to break in my wold. so, i don\'t winned my fear but i chainged myself, i trust some times i\'m winner in my fear and i\'ll not hide some where. i dream it. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Da [이름],

Self-improvement is not a change that occurs overnight, but one that can take months or even years. It is important to prioritize your life in order for self-improvement to occur. Self-improvement helps enhance strengths, improve mental health, and even heal relationships. Some ways of self-improvement include simple tasks such as reading a book, trying something new, mediating, or even waking up early.

~Teacher Cathy

 

I can\'t changed amything because i still scary to change in my side.

>> I can\'t change anything because I\'m still scared to change myself.

i could enything but i don\'t have coureage and i don\'t belive in myself.

>> I could do anything, but I didn\'t have the courage or belief in myself.

of course! i know i have chaing self, and i\'ll making a confident.

>> Of course! I know I have to change myself and make myself confident.

but some times, i want to go to the bed and i make me do nothing just sleeped in the bed forever.

>> But sometimes, I want to go to bed, do nothing and sleep forever.

i think i\'m still child in my mine, i\'m just coward and i don\'t want to break in my wold.

>> I think I\'m still a child in my mind, I\'m just a coward, and I don\'t want to break into the world.

so, i don\'t winned my fear but i chainged myself.

>> I can\'t conquer my fear yet, but I will change myself.

i trust some times i\'m winner in my fear and i\'ll not hide some where.

>> I trust that I\'ll soon win against my fear and not hide somewhere.

i dream it. :)

>> I dream of it. :)

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