I\'m positive for my future
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I\'m pessimist but I\'m positive for my future. I imagined me that become adult nicely before falling asleep. In that imagination, I become a good lawyer and discuss well. So I make innocent person release by discussing well. And, sometimes I make my own film that the main character is me. It\'s not hero story. In this film, sometimes I experience some bad situations, but the end of film is successful. Because of these imaginations, I think even I\'m pessimist, but I like to imagine me that become a good person. It means I am positive for my future. In my opinion, This imagination is good for our sleep because we won\'t have nightmare with this imagination.
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I think I\'m pessimist but I\'m positive for my future.
>> I think I\'m a pessimist, but I\'m positive about my future.
I imagined me that become adult nicely before falling asleep.
>> Before falling asleep, I imagine something nice about myself.
In that imagination, I become a good lawyer and discuss well.
>> I envision myself as a good lawyer.
So I make innocent person release by discussing well.
>> I prove my client\'s innocence by defending him/her well.
And, sometimes I make my own film that the main character is me.
>> I also sometimes imagine myself as the main character of my film.
It\'s not hero story.
>> It\'s not a hero story.
In this film, sometimes I experience some bad situations, but the end of film is successful.
>> In this film, I sometimes experience bad situations, but in the end, I triumph.
Because of these imaginations, I think even I\'m pessimist, but I like to imagine me that become a good person.
>> I think that even if I\'m a pessimist, I imagine myself becoming a good person.
It means I am positive for my future.
>> It means I am positive about my future.
In my opinion, This imagination is good for our sleep because we won\'t have nightmare with this imagination.
>> In my opinion, imagining nice things is good for our sleep because we won\'t have nightmares.
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